I'd say its a good start, the artwork is not he most detailed, but defined enough that I have no issue, the story comes first though. Thus far there is nothing to indicate that MC is Human, this is something that should already be established in the VN. Other than that, looking forward to a sprite(s) of Irvin and whomever was the grey ??? talking to the Captain.
The artwork isn't bad but the outlines arent visible in some parts and I recommend either making it have no lineart/less visible line art or clear lineart entirely :) Snout could be bigger as well but it's alright if you don't follow ^^
Hello! I hope you don't mind me painting over your sprite without your permission but this is an idea of how to improve it! :D I'm not the best artist so bear with me but I think I got the idea across.
Here's what I've changed:
-Larger snout
-Changed a bit of anatomy (hand size, muscles, etc.)
-Clearer lines
-Longer beard on the front (suggests larger jaw)
-Increased hip size to match with torso (I'm not sure if this is needed)
Wow this looks amazing! Definitely more in line to what I imagined he would look like XD
Thanks a lot for the directions, I will find some time to update the design in the future, but for now I want to focus on more story content and new character sprites.
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I am guessing this is an abandoned game now, shame had alot of potential.
Any news?
Is this NSFW?
Nope
(not yet)hmmm not yeeet~
I'd say its a good start, the artwork is not he most detailed, but defined enough that I have no issue, the story comes first though. Thus far there is nothing to indicate that MC is Human, this is something that should already be established in the VN. Other than that, looking forward to a sprite(s) of Irvin and whomever was the grey ??? talking to the Captain.
Thank you soo much for your feedback!
For the artwork, sadly I'm not an artist, as much as I want to make more sprites/expressions, making them is a hard task for me.
As for the identity of MC part I totally didn't notice that mistake, thanks for reminding me! I'll take that into account on the next release.
The artwork isn't bad but the outlines arent visible in some parts and I recommend either making it have no lineart/less visible line art or clear lineart entirely :) Snout could be bigger as well but it's alright if you don't follow ^^
Hello! I hope you don't mind me painting over your sprite without your permission but this is an idea of how to improve it! :D
I'm not the best artist so bear with me but I think I got the idea across.
Here's what I've changed:
-Larger snout
-Changed a bit of anatomy (hand size, muscles, etc.)
-Clearer lines
-Longer beard on the front (suggests larger jaw)
-Increased hip size to match with torso (I'm not sure if this is needed)
-Eye size more matched/synced with eachother
Wow this looks amazing! Definitely more in line to what I imagined he would look like XD
Thanks a lot for the directions, I will find some time to update the design in the future, but for now I want to focus on more story content and new character sprites.
It's REALLY really helpful. Appreciated ^^
No problem! Happy to help :)
This game looks interesting, good luck with your game! :)
Thank you so much!!!